.moon by night

General Library: Voyeur by VO1

Rating:NC17 Created:2009-03-29
Genre:Romance Updated:2009-03-29
Style:General Status:Complete
Setting:Alternate Universe

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Serenity in the SM has some questions, and not the kind you ask out loud. There's only one way to find out. Very NC17.

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Review by Loki 2009-04-08

Very sexy. I must say this was a hot piece of writing, I really enjoyed it.

The descriptions were good, the only thing I did not like were the 'off-of's' you inserted, slang terms that detracted frm the erotically charged power of this piece.

It was not too mechanical as some people write sex descriptions like a description of open heart surgery, only the 'in and out, was a little that way, but the majority of the piece was smooth, ornate and steamy, just as I like... (more)

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