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Review by Loki 2009-04-08

Very sexy. I must say this was a hot piece of writing, I really enjoyed it.

The descriptions were good, the only thing I did not like were the 'off-of's' you inserted, slang terms that detracted frm the erotically charged power of this piece.

It was not too mechanical as some people write sex descriptions like a description of open heart surgery, only the 'in and out, was a little that way, but the majority of the piece was smooth, ornate and steamy, just as I like it...


Excellent work


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