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General Library: Invincible by Araya


Fandom:Sailormoon
Rating:PG Created:2008-04-05
Genre:Romance Updated:2008-04-05
Style:General Status:Complete
Setting:Alternate Universe
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Summary:

Mamoru reminds Setsuna of the woman she is.


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Written for SM_Monthly


 Reviews: 2
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Review by Loki 2008-04-15

This was simply beautiful, a romantic snapshot of a pairing I love, Setsuna is one of my fave characters and this ficlet was amazing!

I loved the way you wrote her Araya-chan, she was definitely sexy, loving and wonderfully human. I like the closeness and vulnerability and also the description of Setsuna's hair touching the floor -- magic!

A couple of little things: when we breathe, there is the extra 'e' when we take a breath, we lose the extra 'e' :D

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Review by Loki 2008-04-15

This was simply beautiful, a romantic snapshot of a pariing I love, Setsuna is one of my fave characters and this ficlet was amazing!

I loved the way you wrote her Araya-chan, she was definitely sexy, loving and wonderfully human. I like the closeness and vulnerability and also the description of Setsuna's hair touching the floor -- magic!

A couple of little things: when we breathe, there is the extra 'e' when we take a breath, we lose the extra 'e' :D

... (more)


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