A young girl moves in next door in the dingy apartment complex, and it changes everything. How far can a car ride take you?
Author's Comments:
Inspired by the song "Fast Car" with Tracy Chapman. Excuse any typos and grammar errors; English isn't my first language. Story can also be found on my LJ.
loved this so much! and i wholeheartedly agree with the review made by Loki. you have SUCH talent. i urge you to write more
Review by Loki
2009-07-03
Despite the fact your story hasn't been BETA'd, I feel you have a definite talent.
This was a touching, gritty, honest and beautiful love story about two people that through circumstance, and yes, perhaps destiny, were brought together. Well done, and if you ever need a sounding board, or help with writing, by all means, look me up, congratulations on telling a warm and tender story!
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