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General Library: Wolf in Friends Clothing by AngelMoon Girl
Fandom: | Harry Potter |
Rating: | PG |
Created: | 2009-10-21 |
Genre: | Drama |
Updated: | 2009-10-21 |
Style: | General |
Status: | Complete |
Setting: | Canon |
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Summary:
Few things truly provoke Albus Dumbledore's rage like attempting to kill Harry Potter under the guise of a friend. From the perspective of our beloved Headmaster, watch as the events following the Third Task unfold, when Harry Potter came back to Hogwarts... Cedric Diggory's dead body in tow.
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Author's Comments:
I've often wondered what happened beyond Harry's perspective on the night he returned, Cedric Diggory's dead body in tow. Most especially, how did his teachers- primarily Dumbledore- react? All we got was a blurred version from a barely conscious Harry, and I'm left wanting. Therefore, why not write it myself? I mean, I'm perfectly capable :-D Sooo, here's my creative take on the events that transpired after the Third Task, from Dumbledore's point of view. Perhaps a little more dramatic than it needs to be, but whatever. Author's license :-) Snape and McGonagall pop their heads in too, as you recall from the impostor Moody rescue. Enjoy the read, and drop me a line! Reviews help an author improve!
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Review by Loki |
2009-10-26
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I love reading Harry Potter fics. This one is an interesting insight into the behind the scenes and you did it justice.
Few knit pickings: some punctuation pairings and ly-adverbs, a bit too many. :) a little proofing to fix typos, but not too many.
Highlights:
I love your way with words, setting a scene and bringing the drama to the fore, you have it just right.
You have a great vocab, a couple of words were repeated, cosmetic.
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