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Review by Loki |
2007-12-15
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I love this, it is like so many things I have read and enjoyed, a book called Ubiq, and other great things. I can see the dark humor, but the tale is powerful enough to hold one's interest.
I noticed few flaws save the contraction, X - alright-X for all right, and a couple of typoes here and there, but these were rare dust bunnies and all else was flawless.
I love your use of language, words skilfully shaped to fit your will. Characterisation was sheer brilliance. They all live and breathe and are convincing, the treatment of the Senshi was also great, yo got their personas spot on and I was impressed.
Hotaru was beautifully written, she was great, the brand of humor was great, dark edge, great. But I love those stories that are enough of a adventure and have other genres to give us a layered presentation the is both entertaining, as has us on the ege of our eats. This fic delivers on so many fronts and I can see you're a talented and gifted writer and I love this. I couldn't stop reading and I am hooked. Great job! A classic in progress! *hands you a crystal pen with the insignia of the Crystal Nexus blazon upon its shaft and bows*
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