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Review by Araya 2008-08-15

You and your Nephrite/Rei addiction!

I love the way you describe Rei's anger and especially her scorching words! I would expect no less from her.

Loved it!

Author's response:

...I do not have a Nephrite and Rei addiction?

>.>

Review by Bella*Luna 2008-08-12

I like the way this feels. I know who they are even though you don't tell us (of course who wouldn't?).

It is angry and sad. I can almost see him staring after her in the rain, shivering after she's walked away.

:D Good job.


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