I just read the first chapter and I am already swooning because Kevin is so perfect that it makes me all achy. Strangely, him not picking out his clothes and new home did it for me. There is something about the way you write him that makes him terribly attractive. Also, I like how different he and Mina are. And that you had her be an artist is a very clever idea, it works beautifully.
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