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Review by bin82501 |
2012-07-07
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Brilliant story
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Review by Araya |
2006-11-15
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Very well done! I have to say this is an original piece that really hits home. Although it tends to drag a bit, the end decision really captures you. A fic surely no one can forget. Keep up the good work!
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Review by Starsea |
2006-11-07
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Very interesting. I always like stories that try to give a glimpse of Usagi's inner life (as long as they don't make it too OOC) and you definitely accomplish that. It felt like the story wandered a bit until the end, with that sudden dramatic decision. Quite sad but memorable.
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Review by Ashaela |
2006-11-05
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It's hard to review without leaving spoilers.... ^_^; Let me say just this, then. Although there were a couple of points where things seemed a bit too vague, the power and emotion (dare I say color?) of the ending really punched. Actually, the technique of starting out kind of bland and then hitting that strong note in the end kind of points up the theme of the story, doesn't it? I think it's well done.
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