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Review by Jessica Pendragon 2007-04-18

Sigh...this makes me mad at Makoto actually.

Like, I can understand Susumu more than her right now. It would be difficult not being a part of a huge past, and in Dry Spell I thought he was kind of being mature when he asked her to resolve it because only she could.

Who can stand against so much pressure and not break? Guess it was kind of doomed to begin with and it's not just one person's fault, it's both of theirs...makes me sad. :( Well, actually it's Nephrite's because he showed up out of nowhere. =P

Author's response:

Good. I'm glad you're mad at her, because when a relationship breaks down, it's very rarely the fault of one person. Both people contribute to it. Perhaps they could have made it work, but he was insecure about Nephrite and Makoto was unsure because of Nephrite and Nephrite... well, Nephrite seems to be a catalyst no matter what he does!


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