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Review by Jessica Pendragon |
2007-11-17
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Okay so I've read up to Chapter Four here and I wanted to leave you a review! Because who doesn't love reviews? ;)
Obvious pros: This story has a rich history with so many different characters and worlds you've crafted. Every world is unique and breathtaking, and the new characters are interesting and seem to fit in with the usual crowd. There's a lot of twists and plots coming together already that I imagine will make further chapters very intriguing. So far it's had its fair share up upbeat moments and serious moments mixed together splendidly. I especially like Miranda for some reason, she seems like a complex character and I expect things will be happening with her later. I'm excited to see what's up in further chapters! It's already an engaging tale and I bet it'll just get better as it goes along. :) This crystal lady
Cons: I hate to say anything bad about what you write because I appreciate all your writing but I want to be truthful and helpful like a good friend. ;) There was a lot going on in the first four chapters that I got kind of confused on everything going on. There's just so many people being introduced and it's a little fast that I had to re-read the first three chapters again. Chapter Four was very good and I didn't have any problems catching everything so I think it was just the first couple chapters that caught me unawares. I just have one thing about Chapter Four: how did they get to Crystal Tokyo and how did they know to go there?
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