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Review by Nephthys Moon |
2007-11-05
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Once again, as I read this, I found myself chuckling. While not as humorous as Sexy is Back, it was still quite funny. I particularly enjoyed Madam Luna - nice touch.
Once again, I commend you for taking a cliche and making it hilarious enough to become fresh. It's one of the hardest things to do in fanfiction. Excellent job on that.
I did pity poor Darien's character - I felt that his characterization could have been a bit improved - but as a plot device, in a humor story, it worked.
I'm really looking forward to seeing what else you come up with!
~Kasey
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