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General Library: Hands Fall Together by Kihin Ranno


Fandom:Sailormoon
Rating:R Created:2006-01-10
Genre:General Updated:2010-02-13
Style:General Status:Incomplete
Setting:Alternate Universe
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Part One: The Consequences of Being Late (PHP)
Part Two: By Any Other Name (PHP)
Part Three: Caffeine Dream (PHP)
Part Four: On Target (PHP)
Part Five: Sea of Strife (PHP)
Part Six: Blood Debts (PHP)
Part Seven: Confidence Man (PHP)
Part Eight: Father of Mine (PHP)
Part Nine: Breaking Up (PHP)
Part Ten: Family Matters (PHP)
Part Eleven: The Mysterious Silver Crystal (PHP)



Summary:

What if the simplest detail could mean the difference between living and dying? What if the time you got up, the people you met, the things you did, the words you said could change your life forever? What if you weren't sure whether or not those changes were good? What if Usagi hadn't been the only one late that day?


Author's Comments:

My eternal thanks and gratitude to the lovely Yumeko who has graciously agreed to be my beta reader for this incredibly lengthy project. She's also provided a wonderful source of Japanese names that have already proved to be incredibly helpful, particularly in the upcoming chapter. ^_^ Be sure to read her stories, especially "Spirit of Fire."

And more everlasting gratefulness must be directed at my beta-beta, the incredibly thorough Dave Ziegler. He picks up on all the mistakes Yumeko and I missed and gives me yet another point of view to take into account.

Sorry it took so long to get Part Ten up! Hopefully there won't be as long of a wait for Part Eleven!


 Reviews: 8
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Review by serentiymoon 2009-06-22

Oh Wow you have finally updated and I am so excited. That sounds slightly pathetic but your story is extremely original and well written. I think one of the things I love abut your story is the fact that it is more adult. It isn't these little teenagers going around being bubbly and happy all the time, the story is basically about a war and you portray that very well. There is the chance of death of injury, and lots of pain. Usagi is more mature and so are the other girls, the stakes are si... (more)
Review by grimorie 2009-05-03

I think I've reviewed this on your FF.Net account but I re-read this story again and I'm just so taken with the scale. I also love the examination of what could have been and the difference Usagi makes.

I also love the glimpse of Minako we get, I love the ruthlessness and the practicality and that scene with Jadaite? Awe.Some. I'm really so glad I stumbled into your work because I never thought there was another Sailor Moon writer out there who writes a Minako that's as awesome a... (more)
Review by serentiymoon 2008-03-26

Oh my gosh! I love your story. Please keep going. i really hope you bring jupiter in so she's my favorite. also I'm really hoping that your going with Mamoru and Usagi having feelings for each other before they discover their past selves. But other than those few hopes and comment really great story.


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