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General Library: The Genesis of an Obligatory Psychotic Jackass by Kihin Ranno
| Fandom: | Veronica Mars |
| Rating: | PG13 |
Created: | 2006-05-18 |
| Genre: | Drama |
Updated: | 2006-06-27 |
| Style: | Character Study |
Status: | Complete |
| Setting: | Canon |
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Summary:
Logan's waking and dreaming world revolved around Lilly Kane when she was alive. And after her death, he can't seem to let go of her in either one.
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Author's Comments:
Pre-series Logan centric fic that I SLAVED over, so I sincerely hope that it does not suck.
19/6/06 - December suggested that I explain this somewhere for those of you reading this for the Review Exchange, so here you are. The term 09ers is not a typo. It refers to the "rich kids" at Neptune High. There is a social divide between classes in Neptune County, and the clearest and most literal line is the one between zip codes. The rich families in Neptune all live in the zip code 90909, and their kids were nicknamed the 09ers.
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Review by Heavenly Pearl |
2006-06-21
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Even though I've never seen the show, I loved this story. The characters are vibrant. the descriptions wonderful -- I really liked how you compared Lilly's dress to "clouds and razorblades"; it doesn't make much sense, yet it does -- and the reactions to Lilly's murder were realistic without going off the deep end into melodrama although it easily could.
Since you said this was unedited, and you know how much I love proofreading your work, here are a few things you might want to c... (more) |
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Review by Starsea |
2006-06-18
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This is a very intense read and a little wearying after a while. At first, you are with Logan, but gradually you begin to understand exactly why he was "too much" for Lilly. His unrelenting misery and anger is very difficult to read, let alone experience. You make his hostility understandable without being excusable, from his dislike of tuxedos to his desperation to avoid sleep. It's a rather hopeless story, but then Logan is a hopeless character, so it fits him. |
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Review by December |
2006-06-09
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This was a pretty intense piece! Having not seen any of Veronica Mars, I can't comment much on the story from an "informed" point of view, but there were a few things that struck me.
First, this story does a great job of painting pictures. Even without the benefit of knowing the series, I could see the scenes and characters clearly, espeically Lilly and Logan. You also made these characters layered. Although Logan on the surface seemed obssessed and asshole-ish, he wasn't some... (more) |
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